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MidnightRider

Member Since 06 Apr 2007
OFFLINE Last Active Jul 18 2011 01:08 AM
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In Topic: Roots of My Creation

02 January 2011 - 04:59 PM

I would like to, but I have no recording software or hardware so probably not. I am still writing the music for this though.

In Topic: Set the World on Fire

25 August 2010 - 08:25 PM

View Poststarsailor, on 17 August 2010 - 05:06 AM, said:

Neat idea MidnightRider good to see you around again, I've been messing around with this just wondered if you'd be into a rewrite, I was thinking of bringing the last verse in a couple more times and I've added some lines, sort of ran with the lyrics you wrote, if you're into doing it I can post up what I've written and if you like them, would like to post a take which I've been working on, no worries if you don't want to change it much, do like this though. :winkthumb:

Yeah, let's see what you've got.

In Topic: Brother, Brother

13 November 2008 - 02:35 AM

Thank you so much for the help I took what you said and tried to change it. And yes I did write in one sitting so this was my first, rough draft so I knew it would need improvement.

I first heard the news about a half past eleven,
That you left us here and went on to heaven.
All I can ask is who did you wrong?
My sorrow could never be expressed in this song.

Brother, brother, that’s who you were to me.
Even heaven has improved since you passed,
That I can guarantee.
November fifth you set yourself free.

I’ve known you ten long years.
You’d want me to live on the best I can,
Though sometimes I can’t help but to shed my tears.
As they fall from my face, your memory I embrace.
And I’ll forever hope that once more you’ll appear.

I’m sorry that you weren’t happy here,
There’s so much more we could have done.
I don’t know what caused your life to fizzle,
My little brother T-dizzle.
One day we’re out having fun, now you’ve disappeared.
Gone like the bullet from a smoking gun.

Brother, brother, that’s who you were to me.
Even heaven has improved since you passed,
That I can guarantee.
November fifth you set yourself free.

Now you’ve left our sad little world,
And have joined the saints in a better place.
You were always free, free as a bird.
The truest man I ever knew, you could never be replaced
We can keep asking ourselves what if?
But I know you are with Jesus smoking a spliff.

Brother, brother, that’s who you were to me.
Even heaven has improved since you passed,
That I can guarantee.
November fifth you set yourself free.

There is a time when we’ll meet again,
You, me, Nathan and Ben.
I will see my little brother Evan,
When my judgment comes and I’m in heaven.

In Topic: Brother, Brother

12 November 2008 - 07:18 PM

thanks a lot everyone. i just kind of thought it sounded too cliche so if there are anylines that you think do, dont be afraid to let me know. thanks again for your sympathy everyone

In Topic: T.i.a.

31 July 2008 - 02:37 PM

no actually i do not live in africa, i live in illinois, but i have a 2 friends from south africa and one from Zimbabwe. im also interested in the conflicts and want to help the attrocities in africa.