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#1 Lcjones

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Posted 19 May 2011 - 11:06 PM

Folks,

Wrote this coming from work tonight.. Please let me know your thoughts. Thanks :)

Wishin' You Here With Me.
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wish i was a barfly sitting on a bar stool
I'd be drinkin a cold beer
and wishing you were here
wish i was a sailor on the big blue ocean
i'd send you a souvenir
wishin you were here
your a lifetime away and I think of you everyday
but I just can't lose the thought
you know I just can't seem to stop
wishing you were here with me

Wish I was a canvas and you were the painter
I'd be waiting for your brush stroke, I'd be wishing for your nimble touch
Wish I was a mountain and you were a moon beam
I 'd be waiting every night for you to cover me up with your light
your a lifetime away and I think of you everyday
but I just can't lose the thought
you know I just can't seem to stop
wishing you were here with me

it might be a million years
in another cosmosphere
i might cry a million tears
but no matter what appears
I'll always wish you were here

your a lifetime away and I think of you everyday
but I just can't lose the thought
you know I just can't seem to stop
wishing you were here with me



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LC

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#2 eddiez152

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Posted 20 May 2011 - 01:52 AM

LC,
Good work, guitar sounds great. Recorded very well.
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#3 carol m

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Posted 20 May 2011 - 02:34 AM

Oh man! Your finger picking gets to me every time - nice song too. I can almost here the drumming of the tyres on the road - it fits perfectly . You know your singing and playing was the first thing that drew me here to gfb, and that hasn't changed. Excellent.:claping:
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#4 Vetinari

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Posted 20 May 2011 - 07:18 AM

Nice one :winkthumb:
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#5 starsailor

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Posted 20 May 2011 - 09:45 AM

Nice write LC, nice performance too, it's a cool song :winkthumb:
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#6 micky mac

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Posted 20 May 2011 - 10:27 AM

thats a nice song
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#7 Lcjones

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Posted 21 May 2011 - 08:00 AM

Thank you all very much! :)

Carol... :)

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#8 Doug

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Posted 21 May 2011 - 11:08 AM

Great song, Les - and well performed. I really like the freshness of it.
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#9 Kirk Lorange

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Posted 21 May 2011 - 08:16 PM

Great song, LC, great performance, great production. Posted Image

#10 hearinvoices

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Posted 21 May 2011 - 08:45 PM

Another good one LC ! :claping:



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#11 Lcjones

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Posted 22 May 2011 - 08:21 AM

Thank you Kirk. Appreciate that very much. Thank you Johnny-mon. :)

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#12 Lcjones

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Posted 22 May 2011 - 08:21 AM

Hey Doug, thanks a ton! :)

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#13 allthumbs

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Posted 22 May 2011 - 11:18 AM

Love the second verse.

#14 Lcjones

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Posted 22 May 2011 - 12:47 PM

Aww. AT, man, thank you!

Here's the full band rough demo


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