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I Just Want To Go Country


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#1 OFFLINE   Briandb1222

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Posted 25 February 2011 - 06:15 PM

Here's a song I'm working on. I can't think of lines for the chorus. I use the title twice. Once in the beginning another at the end. Suggestions/overall suggestions?

Verse 1

The sun shines every day,
Here in the city.
but its just ain't enough
Sometimes I feel okay,
But half the time I feel little bitty
In this crowded population.

Verse 2

I want to feel free,
From this tragic clutter.
But I have pay the fee,
If I want to survive.

Chorus

I just want to go country.

I just want to go country.

#2 OFFLINE   windsong

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Posted 25 February 2011 - 08:19 PM

Well, it looks like a good start





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