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Lcjones    8

Hey guys ......

working a new tune,..... if you have time, please let me know what you think ....

Forever With You (320kb)

Forever With You (128kb)

I'd like get to know you a little bit better

Even after all these years we've been together

You never seem to change

Like a summer afternoon

Can I live forever with you

I've studied every move your body makes

Listened to your heart when you sleep in late

Every morning starts

With another curious clue

Can I live forever with you

Forever with you

Forever with you

Can I live forever with you

I'd like get to know you a little bit better

Even after all these years of growing pleasure

You're a mystery

Like a brand new moon

Can I live forever with you

Sometimes I wonder If you weren't here how lonely I would be

I can't imagine life without you an me

I'd like get to know you a little bit better

Even after all these years we've been together

Lets get old and gray

And always be true

Can I live for ever with you

Forever with you

Forever with you

Can I live forever with you

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carol m    64

A nice laid back weekend sort of song. And some blues harp too. As always, the lyrics are original and fit the music really well. Nice one Les. :claping::thumbup1:

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Lcjones    8

Thanks Carol....

it's been re-written and re-recorded .... much, much better ... :)

http://www.chapmanjones.com/mp3/forever_with_you-11.30.10-x320.mp3

Forever With You

[Verse 1]

I'm getting to know you a little bit better

Even though we've been partners all these years

You never seem to change but every day I find something new

Can I live forever with you

[Harmonica Break]

[Verse 2]

I've studied every move your body makes

Listened to your heart, watched you cry a tear

I love it when you hide your smile I know you're leaving me clues

Can I live forever with you

[CHORUS]

Forever with you

Forever with you

Can I live forever with you

[HARMONICA BREAK]

[bRIDGE]

Sometimes I wonder If you weren't here how lonely I would be

I can't imagine life without you and me

[VERSE 3]

I'm getting to know you a little bit better

We've shared secrets but you're still a riddle for me

We've spent a lifetime dreaming a dream or two

Can I live forever with you

[CHORUS]

Forever with you

Forever with you

Can I live forever with you

[HARMONICA OUT]

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hearinvoices    12

Hey LC I've been listening to a lot of your songs lately and I got to say I have become quite a fan. Great songs ! I really like this one too ! I only have one suggestion and its not much of one really ..... on the second line of the song maybe change partners to together ??...?? It just seems like it would roll a little more poetically with the song... not a real big deal just a suggestion lol. I love the lyrics and the music with it ! Very well done.. I enjoyed it !

Johnny

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solidwalnut    5

Really nice tune, Les. There's a big draw there with this laid back and simple melody.

One comment I have is that while the lyrics are very conversational I think they would benefit from sprinkling in work pictures here and there. No solid suggestions, just a feeling that this might spice up the tune and hold more interest with the listener. One example, although I'm not putting this up as a very good suggestion:

You never seem to change and you're like the morning dew

Can I live forever with you?

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carol m    64

I didn't do a direct comparison but it sounds great - you strum so well it's disheartening! But it tells me I need to do a lot more practicing too, so that's good. I realise as I type i still have a silly smile in place - a real feel-good song and a gentle toe-tapper. Excellent. :claping:

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