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Heres another wee song I had floating around. Would prob be another punk type song, similar in sound to The Clash. (Raspy angry vocals, with some quick distorted guitar shoving it along!).

[verse 1]

Its Friday at work an im bored as ****,

I just cant wait to finish, cant wait to get home.

Cant wait to get a drink, dont ever stop to think.

but life just spins, just sits revolvin

I need to wisen up, gotta start evolvin'.

[chorus]

but all we ever do is just drink, drink, drink,

an all we ever think is just drink, drink, drink.

but the weekend comes....

then the weekend goes....

then Mondays here, and we demand more beer!

[verse 2]

I jump in the car, gonna gun it to the bar,

am thinkin of a pint, get started with the boys.

I bounce in the door, the guys give a roar,

I get in a round, get a shot in for luck

the sambo tastes like piss, but i dont give a ****!

[chorus]

...

[bridge- Solo]

[verse 3]

I wake up rough, a whores in the buff,

I try to see her face, can't remember last night.

I try to find my shirt, fallin over her skirt

I hurry out the door, my head on fire,

my burd is in the house, but im such a ****in liar!

[chorus]

...

[lower tempo - fade out]

tho' i wish i would change,

I wish I could,

I wish a was different,

im minsunderstooooooooood.

I wish it was easy, to change my ways,

I wish it was easy, to end this phase.

I wish I was different, a quiet boy

but in this life, theres just too much to enjoooooooy.

Any critism welcomed/recommendations welcome! Gonna be buying my first electric after summer holidays, so hopefully by then I can start adding the sound i want to these lyrics and share! Doesnt suit an acoustic which is all I have at the moment :-(

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Hi Scotland,

I wasn't too sure about the chorus, did this, no worries if you don't like it just thought it fitted in with the first line of the song, finishing work Friday and having to drag ourselves in on Monday, we always have a couple of guys sick on a Monday. you will find you may have to do a rewrite when you come to sing the song, especially if it's going to be full on which suits this, loads of attitude, I sometimes try to squeeze words in when I should really ditch them, the words sometimes sing differently to how they're written, that said though this seems to roll along nicely, the only thing that hit me was the chorus. bin my idea if you don't like it, just bouncing ideas around, like this, cool song

[chorus]

but all we do is drink, drink, drink,

an all we think is drink, drink, drink.

The weekend comes, the weekend goes

Monday Morning, too much booze

Ring in sick we always do

Cheers

Chris

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Hi Scotland,

I wasn't too sure about the chorus, did this, no worries if you don't like it just thought it fitted in with the first line of the song, finishing work Friday and having to drag ourselves in on Monday, we always have a couple of guys sick on a Monday. you will find you may have to do a rewrite when you come to sing the song, especially if it's going to be full on which suits this, loads of attitude, I sometimes try to squeeze words in when I should really ditch them, the words sometimes sing differently to how they're written, that said though this seems to roll along nicely, the only thing that hit me was the chorus. bin my idea if you don't like it, just bouncing ideas around, like this, cool song

[chorus]

but all we do is drink, drink, drink,

an all we think is drink, drink, drink.

The weekend comes, the weekend goes

Monday Morning, too much booze

Ring in sick we always do

Cheers

Chris

Nice one! I felt the same as you, chorus just didnt feel right, but I love your re-write. Sounds much better. Thought my original chorus felt a bit cheesy! lol

Know what you mean about squeezin in words, guess that comes from when I attempt to write poetry. Will work on stripping my lyrics down more.

[verse 1]

Friday at work, im bored as ****,

cant wait to finish, cant wait to get home.

Cant wait to get a drink, dont ever stop to think.

life just spins, just sits revolvin

gotta wisen up, gotta start evolvin'.

[chorus]

all we do is drink, drink, drink,

an all we think is drink, drink, drink.

The weekend comes, the weekend goes

Monday Morning, too much booze

Ring in sick we always do

[verse 2]

jump in the car, I gun it to the bar,

thinkin of a pint, get started with the boys.

bounce in the door, the guys give a roar,

I get in a round, get a shot in for luck

sambo tastes like piss, couldn’t give a ****!

[bridge- Solo]

[verse 3]

waken up rough, a whores in the buff,

squint to see her face, can't remember last night.

tryin to find my shirt, fallin over her skirt

hurry out the door, my head on fire,

my burds in the house, an im such a ****in liar!

Tried to strip most words that aint needed!

Cheers!

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I heard, that there many new opportunities. It is thankful in advance.

Lol...quite possibly the most random, off topic thing I have ever seen...

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