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More late night scribbling, no tune ideas, or even ideas where I was going...take the wheel or the whip if you please...

Vs

Tie up all your loose ends baby

Lets get on outta here

Leave nothing behind, that they can find

Time to kick it into high gear

Vs

Our futures now lets live it free

It's time we break the chains

The hell with rules they were made for fools

Cut the shackles off our brains

Chorus

Lets get on outta here now baby

Lets get on outta here

Start each day down a new highway

And just get on outta here

Vs

Life's too short to live as a clone

To each their own they say

Open your eyes live what you fantasize

And play with no rules to obey

Bridge{?}

I'm a freeborn free livin freedom man

On a free wheelin free for all freeway jam

Gonna run it wide open and not give a damn...So...

Chorus

Lets get on outta here now baby

Lets get on outta here

Start each day down a new highway

And just get on outta here

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carol m    64

You are on a roll with your lyrics Kenny. To me this needs a full-on rock type style with a driving beat - none of which I can do. Looking forward to hearing this with music - either you or anyone. I'm glad you'r writing lots of stuff, if it starts to dry up you could always get back to BIAB at some point and turn them into music.

Like you - possibly worse than you - my guitar skills aren't good enough to translate my ideas into music....yet. :winkthumb:

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thodwris    1

Another interesting one Kenny.I like where you went with this,sometimes it is good to forget about limits and boundaries and just live your life at the most.Good writing as always,keep it up...

All the best,

Theo

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starsailor    20
hi dude im nebie just say hallo to here

Hi veisismGoke, Welcome to the forum, if you pop over to here http://www.guitarforbeginners.com/forum/introduce-yourself/ you can tell us a bit about yourself and you'll get loads of welcomes.

If you're brand new to guitar check out this link it will help you get started http://www.guitarforbeginners.com/forum/showthread.php?t=890

Hope you're well dude and have fun:guitardude:

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starsailor    20
Thanks Chris, you know the drill...get after it if you like, be cool to hear you do it.

Hi Kenny, I've been messing around with this, would it be ok to move the bridge up and add a verse at the end, here's the verse I made up

Freedom is an open road

A world of the unknown

We need to see what lies beyond

This place we once called home

and the song would look like this, with the changes:

Vs

Tie up all your loose ends baby

Lets get on outta here

Leave nothing behind, that they can find

Time to kick it into high gear

Vs

Our futures now lets live it free

It's time we break the chains

The hell with rules they were made for fools

Cut the shackles off our brains

Chorus

Lets get on outta here now baby

Lets get on outta here

Start each day down a new highway

And just get on outta here

Bridge{?}

I'm a freeborn free livin freedom man

On a free wheelin free for all freeway jam

Gonna run it wide open and not give a damn...So...

Vs

Life's too short to live as a clone

To each their own they say

Open your eyes live what you fantasize

And play with no rules to obey

Vs

Freedom is an open road

A world of the unknown

We need to see what lies beyond

This place we once called home

Chorus

Lets get on outta here now baby

Lets get on outta here

Start each day down a new highway

And just get on outta here

Bridge{?}

I'm a freeborn free livin freedom man

On a free wheelin free for all freeway jam

Gonna run it wide open and not give a damn...So...

Chorus

Lets get on outta here now baby

Lets get on outta here

Start each day down a new highway

And just get on outta here

Well that's the general idea, hit me with your thoughts:winkthumb:

All the Best

Chris

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starsailor    20

Was going to do an edit but run out of time, I dunno you go to make a cup of tea and the whole world changes, I think far too much, just thinking the bridge is better off where you put it kenny before the chorus, still moved it up but played it just now and it seemed to fit, I'll have a cup of tea and play it again (I'm so Rock'n'Roll):smilinguitar:

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carol m    64
I dunno, you go to make a cup of tea and the whole world changes, I think far too much, just thinking the bridge is better off where you put it kenny before the chorus, still moved it up but played it just now and it seemed to fit, I'll have a cup of tea and play it again (I'm so Rock'n'Roll):smilinguitar:

:laughingg::claping:

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... I dunno you go to make a cup of tea and the whole world changes...

I've found that hop's and barley type 'tea' eases those concerns ;)

Like that verse Chris, and as always...these posts of mine are free to do what you please :rockon:

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