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Working Title: Four Doors

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No music to this one, yet... Hopefully there will be.

Any suggestions, criticisms etc are welcome... :)

I wake up in the quiet night

feeling something's not quite right

beside me I can see myself asleep

looking in those eyes of mine

I see that I am dreaming fine

and suddenly I'm pulled inside my head

I walk along a narrow way

that seems to tell about my fate

but I can't understand, no, I just can't

Before me there are four black doors

they're numbered with one two and four

the third one's there but nowhere to be seen

The first one leads to emptiness

no room and no dimensions

and nothing fills the air that is not there

I try to feel my way inside

so I can have a look around

but there is nothing here to see but me

The second stares into the skies

one step and I am flying high

among shapeless clouds and air so full of doubt

Maybe I will land some day

It does not matter anyway

when time is flying far away from me

The fourth door is a mirrored kind

it lets the room inside your mind

and once inside it has no place to hide

dreaming of a blurred out hall

I read the message on the wall

that tells me that one, two and four is three

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Spooky CK! Should be great when you find the music for it.

I saw a man who wasn't there

He stood up there upon the stair

He wasn't there again today

I wish that man would go away.

;)

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Nice lyrics CK, good flow and metre.

"The fourth door is a mirrored kind

it lets the room inside your mind

and once inside it has no place to hide"

Great verse...

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