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starsailor    20

A break up song :crying2:

STOP MAKING A FOOL OF ME

Break ups don't always go to plan

Sometimes the sxxt just hits the fan

This one of ours has not gone well

My life's become a living hell

Did not expect such vitriol

Destruction is your only goal

I thought that you'ld just let me go

But now that's not the case it seems

An arsenal of weird schemes

Spite of varying degrees

For teardrops I had rehearsed

But pure hatred's something worse

You're making a fool of me

Stop making a fool of me

You spend every day persecuting me

Stop making a fool of me

When will you move on, end this cruelty

And stop making a fool of me

Please stop making a fool of me

Pictures of me posing in the nude

Up there for all to see on youtube

Editing lost me an inch or three

Now everbody's laughing at me

My new girlfriend has left guess you heard

You spread the word I have an STD

Now I live a life of chastity

None of the girls in town want sex with me

You signed me up for gay magazines

Sent them to my parents they're surprised

Mother was ok but then she cried

When Father said he used to sleep with guys

You're making a fool of me

Stop making a fool of me

You spend every day persecuting me

Stop making a fool of me

When will you move on, end this cruelty

And stop making a fool of me

Please stop making a fool of me

My boss she called me in quite enraged

Said she had read my facebook page

My abusive comments brought her to tears

She sacked me on the spot as I feared

The police turned up today arrested me

They had a tip off I was dealing weed

I tried to talk them round but I failed

They found a stash and I'm heading for jail

Break ups don't always go to plan

This time the sxxt has really hit the fan

You have had your fun, I'm bereft

I've lost everything there's nothing left

All I have is this desperate plea

Stop making a fool of me

You spend every day persecuting me

Stop making a fool of me

When will you move on, end this cruelty

And stop making a fool of me

Get on with your life, stop harassing me

I've got the message can't you see

Now stop making a fool of me

Please stop making a fool of me

Please stop making a fool of me

I'm begging now it's not my scene

Just stop making a fool of me

Please stop making a fool of me

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©CGSongs

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knight46    2

Whoa, if I ever thought of breaking up with someone this would change my mind. This is a good start Chris, some very good lines. In the chorus you might consider changing S**t to stuff and shortning to a few less verses, but well done.

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starsailor    20
Whoa, if I ever thought of breaking up with someone this would change my mind. This is a good start Chris, some very good lines. In the chorus you might consider changing S**t to stuff and shortning to a few less verses, but well done.

Hi Knight, No I wouldn't like a girl like that, thanks for your feedback on this, no problem changing that word and it can be shortened a bit too, hope you're well Knight and good to hear from you.:winkthumb:

Best Wishes

Chris

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carol m    64

Hey Chris, glad to see you writing again. You nearly fooled me there - it started off straight and then..... veered off into hilarious - got a few laughs from me all right.

How will you put it to music? Are you going to start off straight and then move into comic like the lyrics? Remember Kenny's songs about getting locked up and going crazy? Can't remember the title, but it reminds me of it. I'm looking forward to hearing this. Hmm, I might have to dust off a few of my own lyrics and see how they look with fresh eyes.

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starsailor    20

Thanks for having a look and for your comments Eddiez, Kenny and Carol glad you liked it, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned and some of the things I mentioned happened to people, not to me luckily but they have happened, not too sure how to spot a "Bunny Boiler" though. I'm safely married, it's less stressful.:)

Hey Chris, glad to see you writing again. You nearly fooled me there - it started off straight and then..... veered off into hilarious - got a few laughs from me all right.

How will you put it to music? Are you going to start off straight and then move into comic like the lyrics? Remember Kenny's songs about getting locked up and going crazy? Can't remember the title, but it reminds me of it. I'm looking forward to hearing this. Hmm, I might have to dust off a few of my own lyrics and see how they look with fresh eyes.

Hi Carol, I did a version of this the other night for some friends, and did it quite deadpan, they were a bit surprised when it hit the 4th verse, went down well but I'm still working on it, the one liners before the chorus in this are all spoken which gives the chorus more bounce and allows a bit of anger to come out, the mood is sort of disappointment, anger, dismay and despair, I'm doing more practice than recording songs at the moment but I've written a few and I've just started writing another one, I remember Kenny's song Insane love, I remember Nutty's version of it, liked that, I did one too but it was so over the top that it was almost in orbit, good fun doing it though:winkthumb:

Best wishes to you all

Chris

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