[Hilch]

Hi everyone this is my latest little song please all feed back welcome


Her Eyes

CHORUS
When I look into her eyes
Does this world spin by
When I look into her eys
I don't hear no lies

V1
This feeling I get
I'll never forget
My heart starts racing
When we are embracing

V2
She drives me wild
She is my love child
I love this lady
Named miss McGrady


BRIDGE
Like looking through the eyes of a baby
Seeing through the eyes of child
When I look into the eyes of my lady
Those eyes that drive me wild

CHORUS
When I look into her eyes
Does this world spin by
When I look into her eys
I don't hear no lies

OUTRO
I love her , I really love her
I never want to hurt her
But sometimes love hurts

[WernHalen]

Very nice. I like it.

I dont particularly like the connotation to a love child. Seeing that it is actually the lady you are in love with. Some of the lines are a bit short according to my, but I must add that this is especially nice in certain types of music. it also allows you a lot of room to play with the melody and rhythm...

Anyway, that was just my little oppinion.

[learning to pick]

I like it. It would be good to hear the piece to music

[WernHalen]

I was thinking the same thing, I have difficulty putting music to words, but one I have a melody the rest is easy... sometimes...

[yasir aname]

Hello Hilch

Once again you write a beautiful love song this time about Miss Mc Grady , may I be so bold to offer a little alteration to Verse 2 ?

She drives me wild
I feel like a child
I love this lady
Named miss McGrady


Love child just did not work for me ( sorry )

[Hilch]

I am working on the music guys

I am not very good at playing so you might have to be patient

Finger picking A G C Em at the moment

Thanks for the feed back ( yasir I like what you did with that line mate )

Trev

[Hilch]

Here is a rough draft of my music I have in mind this will be the verses , I just played it over and over , so you can all get the flow of the song

Trev.........

I have never said I could play

[Hilch]

Chords for how I will play this , open means open strings ( no fretting ) with down strums ... Verses picked chorus strummed , bridge and outro strummed , D-d-d-U-d sort of strumming




Her Eyes

v1
A--------------G---
This feeling I get
--------------A-----A-open-open-open-A-open-open-open-A
I'll never forget
A--------------G---
My heart starts racing
-------------------A-----A-open-open-open-A-open-open-open-A
When we are embracing

chorus
D-----------------------C---
When I look into her eyes
G-----------------------D--
Does this world spin by
D-----------------------C---
When I look into her eyes
G----------------A--A-open-open-open-A-open-open-open-A
I don't hear no lies

v2
A--------------G---
She drives me wild
--------------A-----A-open-open-A-open-open-open-A
I feel like a child
A--------------G---
I love this lady
-------------------A-----A-open-open-open-A-open-open-open-A
Named miss McGrady

chorus
D-----------------------C---
When I look into her eyes
G-----------------------D--
Does this world spin by
D-----------------------C---
When I look into her eyes
G----------------A--A-open-open-open-A-open-open-open-A
I don't hear no lies
( Music )
A-open-open-open-A-open-open-open
A-open-open-open-A-open-open-open
A-open-open-open-A-open-open-open
BRIDGE
G---------------------C---------------D-----
Like looking through the eyes of a baby
Em-------------------C ----------D
Seeing through the eyes of child
G---------------------C------------D-----
When I look into the eyes of my lady
Em-------------------C-----------D
Those eyes that drive me wild
OUTRO
G------------C----------------
I love her , I really love her
D------------A----------------
I never want to hurt her
G------------C----------------
I love her , I really love her
G----------------------D-----( slide D to 1st fret then back for one down strum)
But sometimes love hurts

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I changed it a bit from the music I posted to get the words to fit in the music better and I altered a line as well ...

Hope some one reads it until I get around to recording it ( bit busy with family and work at the moment ) ..

Trev......