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Old June 15th, 2006
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Hi here is my latest offering as far as song writting goes ...Slow sort country style music maybe ( what would I know )

I titled it


Do you know me

For I put on these clothes
Then I put on these shows
You only think you love me
But I’m not these clothes
And its all just for the shows
So how can you really know me

At the end of shows
The curtains will close
And you'll be gone with out me
You will leave me there
On that stage I will stare
At the empty seating


For I put on these clothes
Then I put on these shows
You only think you love me
But I’m not these clothes
And its all just for the shows
So how can you really know me


Back in my motel room
There's only loneliness and doom
Those clothes lay on the floor
Feeling naked and bare
Wondering who really cares
And does anyone really love me ?

For I put on these clothes
Then I put on these shows
You only think you love me
But I’m not these clothes
And its all just for the shows
So how can you really know me


Sitting and waiting anticipating
Wondering if you will be there
Walking the back rooms
Nerves over ride my gloom
Cheering and laughter, for I'm on after
That 17 year old kid from there

For I put on these clothes
Then I put on these shows
You only think you love me
But I’m not these clothes
And its all just for the shows
So how can you really know me


Do you really know me

Do you really know me

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Thank you

Hilch

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looks great man wish i knew the melody that was in your head while ya was writing that..

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I wish I could describe it for you guttertrashsingalong

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