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June 10th, 2006
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i need my Poetic Writers!!!!!!! HURRY>
ok theres a girl i love people,she is leavin soon but she might come back again.
shes thinks shes ugly but i knows shes not before she happens to go i want to write her
a poem to remember me.ok this wat i got so far i need some help.
Times Get Rough
Times Get Rocky,
Nothing to be depressed about
hold your head a high
you got a lot to be proud of,
only if the world could see it,
you are the one who shines up
my life,the one who i will never foreget
when you leave,ill hang my head and cry.
alright i know this got nothing to do with guitar but it is out of a act of love.
please help me.
At Least I Got My Hope...To Make It.
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June 11th, 2006
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Playing guitar for what seems like forever.
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Hero,
...just a tip from one who has been in love for 35 years...
When you write a poem to give to the one you love, write from depths of your own heart and not from the heart of others.
Les
Chapman Jones - ASCAP
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Don't bore us. Get to the chorus!
The Jangle Music Project
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June 11th, 2006
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I'm certainly no poet but that sounds like pretty sage advice from IC, Hero.
As a practical comment, don't forget to check your dictionary. Good luck with the girl. 
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June 12th, 2006
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just be honest and say what you really mean--forget about things like appearing cool or being stoic or something, if you care about her-tell her and tell her why---the truth is the strongest way to say something.
Of All the Things I've Lost it's My Mind I Miss the Most
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June 12th, 2006
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times have been rocky
times have been tough
but i've always had you to
cheer me up
those brilliant eyes,
that perfect smile
i cant stand to be away
for even a while
more than a pal
more than a friend
ill wait a lifetime
to see you again
ok im no poet, i still have a day job
gg
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June 12th, 2006
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Nice, gg...!!! :o)
Cheers
Ben
All of us could take a lesson from the weather. It pays no attention to criticism.
Albert Schweitzer
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June 12th, 2006
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Originally Posted by goldengirl
times have been rocky
times have been tough
but i've always had you to
cheer me up
those brilliant eyes,
that perfect smile
i cant stand to be away
for even a while
more than a pal
more than a friend
ill wait a lifetime
to see you again
ok im no poet, i still have a day job
gg |
You done good GG
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June 12th, 2006
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wow man. that surpsrised me.Real Nice thanks.i really like that i think its beutiful and thats hard for a tough guy to say hehe  Thanks alot.
At Least I Got My Hope...To Make It.
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June 13th, 2006
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Originally Posted by goldengirl
times have been rocky
times have been tough
but i've always had you to
cheer me up
those brilliant eyes,
that perfect smile
i cant stand to be away
for even a while
more than a pal
more than a friend
ill wait a lifetime
to see you again
ok im no poet, i still have a day job
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You remind me of me, only a better-writer alternate universe version of me.
There should so be a love poem/song thread.
Gibb/Sink
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June 17th, 2006
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Coming in a little late here, and even though Golden Girl has a nice feel, I would agree to go with the first advice given. Its YOUR Heart and YOUR Girl and whatever passes between your hearts has to be as genuine as Gods Dawn lest she ever finds out that she fell in love with some else's words. And that would be a pain too tragic for the telling, Chords too painfull bear as a mighty heart was felled in the the lie.
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June 17th, 2006
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Times Get Rough
Times Get Rocky,
Nothing to be depressed about
hold your head a high
you got a lot to be proud of,
only if the world could see it,
you are the one who shines up
my life,the one who i will never foreget
when you leave,ill hang my head and cry.
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PS,
They're YOUR WORDS from YOUR HEART and Mind and They are BEAUTIFUL. Simply BEAUTIFUL.
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June 17th, 2006
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Hero Writes,
alright i know this got nothing to do with guitar but it is out of a act of love.
please help me.
Believe me Hero LOVE has EVERYTHING to do with the GUITAR.
I once had a teacher who asked me a simple question.. Why did I choose the Guitar.
I responded by saying, Because you can pick it up, sit it on your knee and basically, cuddle it. It is a very Intimate relationship. And since I have taught myself to play in the Classical Finger Style, I now find the relationship even more Intimate.
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June 17th, 2006
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Ps, Ps,
Getting a bit carried away on this one. Please forgive. My Muse has to battle with some serious Health problems and I am forever Going DOH!! Why did'nt I think of that before. My last piece of advice on this is to simply drop this line,
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only if the world could see it,
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The WORLD Does not need to see it. YOU See it and THATS ALL She needs to know!!!
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June 18th, 2006
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ok wow a lot of intresting stuff here,anywayz shes gone and she never loved me so ahhh freg it might as well move on. 
At Least I Got My Hope...To Make It.
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June 18th, 2006
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make a voodoo doll and teach her a lesson(kidding)
RIP Dimebag
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