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good order?

alright guys i made a new song i dont want to post it because there are a lot of rip offs goin around anywayz my song is pretty short
its a little intro about 4 lines
then chorus about 4 lines
then another plot of music
then another chorus and a bridge
oh and i was wondering whats a Bridge??


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a musical passage linking two sections of a composition = bridge.

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"Where's the confounded bridge"


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Hero,

Just a short note ....

I've been writing and posting lyrics for years. I have yet to be ripped off. Of course, that could be taken in several different ways. Such as, my lyrics aren't worth ripping off, they're really good and someone is afraid to rip them off or, and my best guess is, the vast majority of people are good and honest and would not intentionally rip anyone off because they value the author and artist.



Where are the verses?

We have .....

1) Intro
2) Chorus
3) Musical Interlude
4) Chorus
5) Bridge

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is good to have a small pre chorus,then a chorus thats juss says the name of the song?


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Hero,

A pre chorus is pretty much the same as a bridge. The pre-chorus/bridge/lift (it's known by a number of names) in most cases is the setup for the chorus. Kind of a climb up the hill to get to the chorus. And then of course the chorus would be the culmination of that climb.

"Just the name of the song" ....

The term "Just the name of the song" is truly missing the point and purpose of "just the name of the song". The title (name of the song) is or rather should be the "hook" which in turn is most commonly found in the chorus. The title is the first thing a listener hears or reads about your song. The title is used as a tool to grab the attention of your listener so they "will" listen to your song.

As well, the title in most cases is the "hook" or "punch line" the listener waits for. It's usually found in the chorus.

Sure, using a one line chorus can be killer, like Dylans' 'Shelter From The Storm". And notice the title of the song! One of the many thing that makes this title very good is Dylan's use of alliteration, "Shelter From The Storm". It rolls off the tongue like a tangerine Life Saver.

You should take time and real care in choosing just the right words for your "hook". The hook is where your listener gets paid off for sitting through your song. It should be catchy and easily remembered


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Les,
You are a wealth of song writing knowledge! Didn't think I would be needing any of this when I first got on the forum, but I sure do now!! Thanks!


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Thanks D! If I can help just holler!

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Hero,

Just a short note ....

I've been writing and posting lyrics for years. I have yet to be ripped off. Of course, that could be taken in several different ways. Such as, my lyrics aren't worth ripping off, they're really good and someone is afraid to rip them off or, and my best guess is, the vast majority of people are good and honest and would not intentionally rip .
I have no doubt it is the later Les as your lyrics are very good to read
( when no music is being played )

I believe that lyrics to a song should be a story that takes the reader/listener on a journey , and the structure should be in a way that does not confine the author strict rules that need to be complied with.

Chorus
V1
V2
chorus
v3
v4
bridge
chorus
outro

What ever the structure as long as it carries the words in a way that listener / reader believes they have done something , loved someone , left someone ect.....

That just my old 5 cents worth

Trev........

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