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May 30th, 2006
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A song I'm actually proud of
This one is very very personal on my level... it's called "seeing blind" It took awhile to write it, definetely thought out on my part...I just hope that comes through...
V1
The deal...
The deal is set in stone
I envy the blind
for they can't see it coming
and I can see it all
Who will catch me when I crumble?
The ground is getting soft
my hearts with you all
I'll stand where I fall
I'm going home
Pre-Chorus
I need a blind man
to teach me how to see
and I need a savior
to set my poor soul free
Chorus
So where is the doorman?
and why won't he let me in?
My fear sinks in slowly
as I sit in wait
for my hell to begin
V2
Our lives passed us by
on the wings of a sparrow
I'm stuck in a world
condemned by their greed
and their sorrow
*Pre chorus/chorus again*
Bridge
Now the night is upon us
it's darkness's last call
all the light is below me
I can't see at all
and the fire is above me
it's burning endlessness
all my years are before me
I have a past I can't forget
Outro
So where is the doorman
and why won't he let me in?
All my fear sinks in slowly
as I sit and wait for hell to begin...
END
*Copyrighted under federal law* I spent the thirty bucks and had it done..not saying anyone would steal it, but you just can't be too careful...
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May 30th, 2006
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Have you got the music picked out?
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May 30th, 2006
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Well, I'm a beginner on guitar, but I have the basis for it...I can play the guitar and keep the beat with it while I sing the song...so yea, I have the foundation started...I can post audio if need be...
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May 30th, 2006
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Cool. Maybe can upload it for us sometime.
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May 31st, 2006
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I'll record it tomorrow, and upload it, the thing I record on is a crappy source, but it gets the idea across...have any feedback on the lyrics?
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May 31st, 2006
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Playing guitar for over a year.
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Greattttt !!! Looking forward to listening to it Pal !!! 
Kindest Regards
Kush 
No one can master every aspect of guitar playing, they just get better everyday.
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May 31st, 2006
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Ok...I'm fixing to record it..now...I only know how to set up a file for download, how do I set one up so you guys can just play it without downloading it?
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May 31st, 2006
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We don't have streaming here. We're used to dowloading ,don't worry about it.
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June 1st, 2006
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Oh ok...Well I'll record it and put up the link for the download...thanks!
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June 1st, 2006
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Not the best in the world, but here it is minus the 2nd pre and chrous...had to make it fit...my voice was kinda tired,but not too bad...enjoy
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.ph...F9422E7F89413E
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June 3rd, 2006
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Just started playing guitar.
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Unfortunately, this file has expired. A file link is only valid for a certain number of days or a limited number of downloads, whichever occurs first.
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Too bad. I wanted to hear it though. Tell me if you ddecide to upload it again.
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June 3rd, 2006
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It didn't work for me either. You can follow the directions on this link to upload it directly to this site.
Not sure how to upload a music file. Read this.
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June 4th, 2006
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http://s82.photobucket.com/albums/j2...=Mememe028.flv
you can do it here...I'm hosting it here, so it should be there...don't laugh at my guitar playing...I'm not very good at all, but I'm way better than I was a few months ago...the voice is alos off with the video for some reason...can't fix it, but the sound is all there...
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June 4th, 2006
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Playing guitar for what seems like forever.
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Very nice ForeverDecember. You certainly have a nice voice and your lyrics are good too. Once you get bit more fluent on the guitar I reckon you could lift the tempo a bit, lighten up the guitar work some and you'll have a winner. 
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June 4th, 2006
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What 737 said. You have the frame work. Now it is just a matter of polishing it.
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