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Somebody Rained On My Parade

Thought I'd post this one, about a guy that loses his job. not the most cheerful subject I know but worth writing a song about

Somebody rained on my parade

Verse 1

Woke up this morning full of hope
What a great day to be alive
I checked the mail, one envelope
My monthly wages had arrived

Moving towards the living room
I kissed my wife she smiled at me
She saw the letter in my hand
And knew it was my salary

Chorus

Somebody rained on my parade
Inside was not what I'd been paid
A short note from the management
We regret to say you are redundant

Verse 2

I gave that company all those years
Young and old, blood sweat and tears
It was a shock more than dismay
When they surprised me in this way

No gold watch for my years of service
My wife in tears looking nervous
What ignorance thought I deserved this
Just a number completely worthless

Chorus

Somebody rained on my parade
Inside was not what I'd been paid
They tore up all of the plans I made
My trust in them had been betrayed

Verse 3

On the scrapheap at fifty five
Replaced by a much younger guy
Natural wastage is the term
Created by some sharp intern

No thoughts of using all my knowledge
Just bright ideas learnt in college
I didn't fit researched logistics
So I became a new statistic

Chorus

Somebody rained on my parade
A cowards message was relayed
They tore up all of the plans I made
My trust in them had been betrayed




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I hate when that happens......Good one Chris, I like how you used a different set of lyrics in each chorus.


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Chris,
Thats quite a writing. Good job. Or was it a bad one?


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I hate when that happens......Good one Chris, I like how you used a different set of lyrics in each chorus.
Happened to me a few years ago at Christmas, bit of a knockback and bad timing. Thanks for having a look Kenny, pleased you like the different chorus lines seemed to fit this song, it gets angrier as it goes along

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Chris,
Thats quite a writing. Good job. Or was it a bad one?
Thanks for having a look Eddie, I prefer the Song to the job that didn't go so well


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Another nice one Chris. The change in Chorus is a nice touch...way to go.

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Another nice one Chris. The change in Chorus is a nice touch...way to go.
Thanks Knight, I hoped changing the words for each chorus would work so I'm pleased you guys liked it


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