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ECHOES IN TIME rewrite and ideas

Hi guys, This is a rewrite of a song I put on a while back, with an idea of where I'm going with it, thought I'd try and show what's going on in my head when I write a song,hope it's more interesting than confusing, this is pretty much finished now just needs a bit of fine tuning and recording, I've not been known for my speed in recording but I've got to do this one, hope you like what I've done

ECHOES IN TIME

Verse 1 (Fingerstyle)

There is a music store in a shady part of town
Guitars in the window could do with a dusting down
Run by and old man who used to be somebody
A flower child dependent on memories

Short Bridge (Fingerstyle)

Verse 2 (Strumming)

His shop used to be the talk of the town
The finest guitars for miles around
Rising Stars would come from afar
Some just to hangout, play guitar
The scene was so vibrant, jam sessions upstairs
Pretty young girls with flowers in their hair
Now the girls are all Women the flowers have died
Stars have all faded guitars put aside
The old man walks in turns the open sign
But the music's gone it's just echoes in time

Bridge

Echoes in time
Echoes in time
Echoes in time (reverb or chorus)

3 Note Bridge (Fingerstyle)

Verse 3 (Fingerstyle)

He walks to the window to paint the words closing down
Watches for customers, has a good look around
People have moved on there's nothing there left to see
His mind starts to drift to a place in his memory

Short Bridge (Fingerstyle)

Verse 4 (Strumming)

The street used to be such a colourful sight
Street markets and parties so full of life
As young girls showed off their 60s looks
Young men sat in cafes read Kerouac books
Now the plans for a road trip, collect dust on a shelf
Concerns on looks replaced by ones about their health
The old man walks over turns the shop closed sign
Hears no sound from the street just echoes in time

Bridge

Echoes in time
Echoes in time
Echoes in time (reverb or chorus)

3 Note Bridge

Verse 5 (Fingerstyle)

He sits in the back room and plays an old folk guitar
Feels quite tired so stops, lights up a cigar
Then closes his eyes and lays back in his easy chair
Joins Hendrix and Joplin, he knows he is welcome there

Short Bridge (Fingerstyle)

Epilogue (Strumming)

The old man rises from his easy chair
Music's coming from the room upstairs
The shop displays the finest guitars
Pretty young girls are mixing with stars
The old man pauses, wipes away a tear
He's seen the future, but it's much better here
Once again he's a young man in his prime
The sounds are now real not echoes in time

Echoes in time
Echoes in time
Echoes in time

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Starsailor,

Well, it looks good, careful not to make it too long. Looking forward to hearing your version when ready. Lyrics has lots of good potential.


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Starsailor,

Well, it looks good, careful not to make it too long. Looking forward to hearing your version when ready. Lyrics has lots of good potential.
Thanks for having a look Eddie, when I played it through it came in at 4 to 5 minutes but it will probably be a bit longer so length is a bit of an issue might have to trim it a bit, adding the final verse seemed to tie the song up but it does make the song longer.

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Nice Chris, last verse finishes it up well...looking forward to listening to this!


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Nice Chris, last verse finishes it up well...looking forward to listening to this!
Thanks for having a look Kenny, thought that was a good way to end the song


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Like the story line! Waiting to here the finished product!


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Nice job Chris, nice flow to the lyrics. What kind of music are you thinging about for this piece?

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Good question knight, finding it hard to put into a genre, it's along folk lines really, the fingerstyle verses are up on the 5th and 6th frets, and quite slow,the strumming's up on the 5th and 7th frets, and moves along I switch halfway through those verses alternating between the 5th and 2nd Frets and the vocal changes down. I've tried to keep the tone light and the vocal should create the atmosphere. Chord wise it's pretty basic and the fingerstyle is simple as I'm still learning this, trying to fit it together is the hardest thing I've challenged myself with this, sorry I haven't recorded it yet, it sounds like a nice song when I play it, I might try and post some chords or tabs, this is quite an easy song to play and enjoyable. Thanks for having a look Knight.

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Has a kind of Lightfoot/Prine feel to it and judging from your description should be very nice indeed.

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I wish I could play and sing as well as those guys Knight but yes it is along those lines, probably closer to John Prine than Gordon lightfoot, I've been checking out John Prine for a few days he's great, like his style, and it's hard to resist Gordon Lightfoot's rich vocals they really bring a song to life


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