[Hilch]

Hi

Now if this isn't politically correct I am sure the mods with delete it

But it just one view on the world and in particular my life ...

I do not or was it my intention to write a song that people find offensive , and I am sorry if it does .

I can say whole heartedly this is just a song , that has religious content with in ..

THIS IS NOT MEANT TO BE DISREPECTFUL TO ANY RELIGION OR BELIEFS


Verse 1
I’ll be going to church on Sunday
I’ll probably be sinning by Monday
Mum always told me its in that book
Just open your mind and have a look

Verse 2
Going to church and praying
Does he hear what I’m saying
I hold dear to that sacred book
Learning about forgiveness
Though I can’t forgive that crook

Chorus
The devil has his ambitions
For all our life’s decisions
Doesn’t matter what you try
Being a little naughty
Or perfectly nice

Bridge
I don’t fear him now
Wish he would take his bow
I’m no longer lost
As I finally found the cross
I don’t fear him now

Verse 3
I never hide my feelings
My stories will have you reeling
Be honest with yourself
And smile with everyone else
Mum do you forgive me now


Chorus
The devil has his ambitions
For all our life’s decisions
Doesn’t matter what you try
Being a little naughty
Or perfectly nice
_________-

Trev

[coldethyl]

Looks pretty good to me Trev.

[Hilch]

Thanks Neil I was playing around with maybe a 4 th verse
I don't know though

Trev

[knight46]

Trev,
Pretty good, has a blusy quality to me. Do you have a melody in mind?
Also if you don't mind:

Chorus
The devil has his ambitions
For all our life’s decisions
Are you ready to pay the price
Being a little naughty
Or perfectly nice

[knight46]

Trev,
Just put this together very quick. Not real clean but...see what you think.

[Hilch]

I do Knight but I can't seem to get it from head to guitar yes Bluesy flavour ..

Thats a excellent line there mate can I steal it ???? huh can I ...

Trev..

Knight disreguard my PM ..I must be going Blind

[knight46]

Absolutely...my pleasure.

[Hilch]

Thats a awesome voice Knight ..

Now we need to add some guitar to it ...mmmmm wish I was better

You have it exactly , I can't sing it or play it ...But we have vocals here now

Trev

Thanks

[knight46]

Glad you liked it, I can sing at work just haven't found a way to play guitar

[billywhitebread]

thats a cool song style thingy ya got goin on here....as a worship leader in my church i could see myself working on this and actually using it...in my opinion, the only element that is missing to make a complete story line is how the storyteller found his redemption...is it ok to kick around some ideas?

[Hilch]

Kick Kick go right ahead

I just hope this doesn't offend thats all

Trev

[Hilch]

SoundClick song info: Life song v2 by hilch - Song info page with free MP3 music downloads

Here is Knight and myself singing along ..OK OK I mucked my line alittle but its only the 2nd Draft

Knight I was suppose you dreamt of doing a duet with some beautiful lady female singer sorry about that

Trev

[Hilch]

Thanks for reading Mick

Trev