[Hilch]

Here is a song I wrote last year , its suppose to be a up beat rock song ..Hope someone likes it , and no I can't play it as I am hopeless on a guitar but if you want to have a go ....Go for it its' all fun

Sleeping in my king sized bed
Soft downy pillow for my head
I am off into the land of nod
Where I am treated like a god

Erotica, Fantasies fill my head
Nothing here for me to dread
Super models and super stars
Fast women and faster cars

Oh no what is that sound
I jump up and spin around
Buzzing screaming in my head
Alarm clock I wish you were dead

Week-end Week-end how
I wish it was the week-end now
Week-end week-end how
I wish it was the week-end now

Shower coffee morning rush
A quick wipe with the shaving brush
Fighting with the early traffic jams
Kids screaming about their exams


At work boss man is such a jerk
Nothing but a glorified office clerk
God I know I know I’m late again
I’m wishing it was the week-end


Week-end week-end how
I wish it was the week-end now
Week-end week-end how
I wish it was the week-end now


Feed back welcome

[wcostley]

COOL!!!
I wish I could or would have dreams like that.
Skip

[Hilch]

So do I wcostly so do I

[eddiez152]

Darn Good Lyrics Trev I like this one.
Take it back, I love this one. It is your greatest so far

[Aunt Doty]

Well.......another good one.......hmmmm......maybe this one is your best!?

[Hilch]

And no spelling mstakes yay

I am a office clerk by the way

thanks for the feed back

Trev...

[Mike8307]

Do you have a title for hit Trev? How about WORKIN' MAN'S BLUES

Might sound good with a rhythm like James Taylor's Traffic Jam.


Mike

[Kirk Lorange]

Well written, hilch. You're getting better and better at this.

[Hilch]

Thanks for the feed back Mike and Kirk ..

The title well I forgot to post that is " Week-End " ..

Thanks

Trev..

[knight46]

Yep, nice job Hilch. This would sound good as a blues type song. Man you are really getting the hang of this writting thing.

[krissovo]

They are great, I would love to hear this with a funky blues groove.

[krissovo]

Here is something to try, I was just listening to Led Zeppelin and Whole lotta love. These lyrics fit quite well I think.

[Hilch]

I can't play that Kirissovo

If you can let me know

[krissovo]

Originally Posted by hilch

I can't play that Kirissovo

If you can let me know

I had a play with this yesterday and I will upload a snippet with a full version later in the week if you dont mind.

[starsailor]

Another good one hilch, would sound good as a blues number, will be cool hearing it sung to a whole lotta love.