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All eyes are on me

Hi

The wife loves to watch those Americian police shows , where the cops always solve the crime and get their man
{ only if it happened in the real world }
Anyway I sat with her and watched one , it was about this guy who ended up being a druggie living on the streets stealing and doing what ever he could do to get cash to pay for his habit .

Then he met a girl he went to school with and hasn't seen her since them days long ago , they fall in love and she turns his life around but when there is a multiple murder in the nieghbourhood the first suspect is him ..

It turns out it wasn't him but this is about everyone watching him and not trusting him ..

All eyes are on me

All eyes are on me
For all the wrong
Reasons I m sure
All eyes are on me
But its' only your
Eyes I'm looking for


I'm more of a sinner
Than a saint
A romantic man
Is something I aint
Been behind the bars
Joyrideing foriegn cars


I've smoked some weird sh!t
Was always looking my next hit
You came right along
Just like some old time song
Eyes so blue and lips so red
If not for you I'd be dead

Bridge

Now I got all these
Eyes looking at me
Eyes of the law
Eyes from the doors
Their all looking at me
What do they see
What do you see

I haven't seen you
For fifteen years
As the memories flood
Back so do the tears
We were lovers at school
But never breaking the rules

"All eyes are on me
I feel their jealousy
As we walk out the door,
All eyes are on me
But its' only your
Eyes I'm looking for."


I hope someone gets something out of it , I have a tune in my head for it but due to the lack of ability in playing I can't post a mp3 of me playing and singing it ..

Cheers

Trev...

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I see that once you became a Grand Member you've not only gotten a face lift but you're writting songs, it must be a real inspiration to become a Grand Member.
You're all right Trev.
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go for it hilch what kinda tune was ya thinking of country,blues folk, rock hey, we could have a competition to put a tune to trevs words


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Im thinking soft rock eagles sort of tune

Trev...

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Trev,
I see you getting bit by the bug. Keep up the work, and lets see what you can do with this one.


Nothin sweeter than the sound of music comin out of a 6 string box - EZ me Music / ASCAP
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Anything Eagles is great

Well done


I miss the comfort in being sad
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Great lyrics Trev!


"Good Music is that which penetrates the ear with facility and quits the memory with difficulty" Thomas Beecham
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