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"I" is stolen (My first original composition)

Just to let you know, "I" is my guitar. Not myself. I named it "I" which is short for ibanez. "I" was never acually stolen, but this song was based on a dream I had. I have not made up the melody and solos for it yet, just the lyrics and the arrangement so far. Anyone want to suggest a melody, feel free.

Oh, and sorry if it's all dark and gothic and stuff, it's just my type of writing.

“I” is stolen

(Intro)
Eternal years have passed right by
The demon now arisen
I just realized,
For all I know…
“I” IS STOLEN!

(Chorus)
The glass case was smashed to bits
A trail of blood behind
Hellion has run loose
For precious “I” is stolen

(Verse 2)
Lying on a bed of nails I’m watching life pass by!
A mysterious figure sits on a glass shelf
Collecting years of dust
Now I feel the beast inside break through!

(Chorus)

(Verse 3)
The search has begun for precious “I”
It may never end!
The sands of time are ticking away
To the point of no return!
“I” is stolen!

(Solo)

(Outro)
I’m never out of this forest of pain
Everything blocks my way!
Shattered glass and broken tiles
Tell me it’s all real!

(Chorus)

(Death metal screaming)
“I” was stolen!
“I” was stolen!
“I” was…
STOLEN!


Bands Ive seen: All that Remains, Dragonforce(2x), Chimaira (2x), Killswitch Engage, Terror, Divine+Heresy, Katakylsm, Three, Between the Burried and me, Opeth, Dream Theater, High on fire, Job for a cowboy, Children of Bodom, In Flames, Megadeth
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I can't wait to hear it in the member recordings.

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(Death metal screaming)
“I” was stolen!
“I” was stolen!
“I” was…
STOLEN!



Hope you get some death metal stuff in there, would love to hear it.


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