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Old March 18th, 2007
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New work from me, 'Times(I'll Be There)'

'Times(I'll Be There)'

You've helped me through some rough times
You've been the one I call
You've been there for my conscience
To help me carry on

For those times that you may stumble
And those times that you may fall
I can promise you one thing
I'll be there to pick you up

I know I've hurt you badly
Those days always linger on
And I know that you forgave me
And I can't thank you enough

As I sit here and ponder
How our lives are gonna change
Only one thing seems to matter
So here is what I'll say

For those times that you may stumble
And those times that you may fall
I can promise you one thing
I'll be there to pick you up

For those times that you may stumble
And those times that you may fall
I can promise you one thing
I'll be there... I'll be there

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Really nice lyrics.


Nothin sweeter than the sound of music comin out of a 6 string box - EZ me Music / ASCAP
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Really nice lyrics.
Ditto...

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Hi

Nice writting , one little thing I can't seem to not to mention and I hope you don't mind ..

For those times that you may stumble
And those times that you may fall

In the first line if you take out the word may as it is repeated in the second line I feel brings those 2 lines closer and deeper { in my opinion }

For those times that you stumble
And those times that you may fall

with the rest of the chorus added Becomes

For those times that you stumble
And those times that you may fall
I can promise you one thing
I'll be there to pick you up


Just my opinion like I said , but the rest is really good IMO

Cheers

Trev..

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