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Well I am 14 years old and this are my first lyrics. I don't have a very wide range of words so this is the best I can do. As I've said my native language is much more different than english so really I can't much best!!!!


~MY FEELINGS~
(it is quite rap/hip hop)

Love can make people change
Even when they're out of chance
'Cause love is just like a game
Especially if you're insane

Chorus:
That's how I feel about you
I can't live when I'm without you
That's how love is for me
A life full of you and not only me

Your name sounds like a sweet melody
Your appearance brings a very nice memory
Of what I felt when I first saw you
In that bar but I didn't know you

Chorus

That first time you looked into my eyes
I asked you for a drink and I nearly died
The second time I knew i was dead
And that feeling wasn't in my head

Chorus

**END**

~DAYDREAMING~
(this is a bit regge/rap)

When I woke up in the morning
My life was a hell and very disappointing
When I fell asleep at night
I was heavenly happy 'cause i had seen the light

Chorus:
The light was you
You were the light
And I think I was dreamin'
About you all night

When I woke up in the morning
I was still in heaven and that was very enjoying
When I fell asleep at night
I was sure I wasn't dreamin' ant that you were the light

Chorus:
With you I 'm in heaven
Heaven when I'm with you
I know I can't pass a minute
If i don't see you...

**END**

~THE COLOURS OF THE SPECTRUM~
Your eyes are blue
And I really love you
Your eyes are green
They're the best I've ever seen

Your eyes are black
and I have a heart attack
Your eyes are grey
They make me wanna stay

Your eyes are brown
And I'll sound like James Brown
But I feel good
And I'm in a very good mood

**IT IS NOT COMPLETED YET**

This song is written for a band that asked me to write it. (It is supposed to be a metal song, but it doesn't sound like one!!)

~ENDLESS NIGHT~

As I walk into the room
Better call it room of doom
I see you in the bed
And you've turned away your head
And I know......

Chorus:
This is going to be an edless night
'Cause we had another fight
Everytime I say it,..I sih
But our situation isn't bright

As you walk out of the room
I... look outside the moon
Now I know that we are done
By noon I must be gone
And now I'm sure....

That was our last and endless night
'Cause we had another fight
Everytime I said I alwayssighed
But our situation wasn't bright..

**THAT'S ALL FOLKS**
( parapumpumpumpum, parapumpumpumpum, parapumpum parapumpum, parapumpuuuuuuuuuuum)


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I'm speechless with admiration that someone of 14 can write lyrics at this level in a foreign language.


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I'd like to thank you all!! my native language is Greek and it is very different. My grandmother is from england and she lives here so I practise my english every day.I would like to thank you all very much!!!


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