"Cloudy Day" Original song (Improvised phrasing)

GT · #1 January 2nd, 2007

So, here i am again with the same drum idea as the other song i uploaded. This time i was on a completly diferent mood. Its all improvised in one take to preserve the authenticity of the recording, and that means there are some "issues" here and there. Its a phrasing theme, enjoy

allthumbs · #2 January 2nd, 2007

Great playing. You hit a strong melody idea around the 1:50 mark. My honest opinion is that the phrasing didn't really move the melody forward because it lacked a cohesive center to connect everything together, if you get what I am saying. A home base that the phrasing revolves through and around would have made this killer. I loved the tone and feel you were going for.

GT · #3 January 2nd, 2007

Thanks for being honest man, i apreaciate it. I was playing with this idea when i was making the recording. That´s why theres no "base" on it, just ideas over an structure. But once more, thank you for your sugestions, ill sure do another take of this song with a more solid idea