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January 20th, 2008
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Join Date: Jan 2008
Last Online: 3 Weeks Ago 05:08 AM
Location: Sweden
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I made a song for my daughter...
I made a song for my daughter and i recorded it very quick with the things i had at home...
She made the lyrics and i made the music...
it's not really finished yet but you get the ide'...
There's going to be lot's of changes...
More guitar and more singing...
Were did we go wrong.MP3
Let the Music Play!
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January 20th, 2008
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Join Date: Sep 2006
Last Online: 1 Week Ago 07:24 PM
Location: california
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Wow that is good, love her voice. Beauty eh. JB
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January 20th, 2008
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Chrispy,
You put together a fabulous recording. NIce job on that first out.
She has a great voice. Playing is super.  
really rockin there folks.
eddiez
Nothin sweeter than the sound of music comin out of a 6 string box - EZ me Music / ASCAP
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January 20th, 2008
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Chrispy,
I think your tune Where Did We Go Wrong is an excellent tune. Very well thought out. Very well put together.
You mention you have lots of changes to do. I'll be honest the only change I would even think about is bringing the vocals up and out front. Your daughter has a great voice going. Put her out front not the music. This is a pop tune and pop tunes always have the vocals out front and in your face. Thats the way the are meant to be.
Your instruments are spaced very well. No instrument is over-bearing though perhaps in some places the synth could be rolled back slightly. The instruments are clean and clear. The melody is very nice and easy on the ears. The chord progression is pleasing.
All in all, if I heard this on the radio I'd say there goes a real nice tune.
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January 20th, 2008
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Well done to the both of you 
"To play without passion is unexcusable" - Ludwig Van Beethoven
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January 21st, 2008
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Sounds great! Lovely voice!!!
Music is a universal language!
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January 21st, 2008
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Thats really impressive sounded super professional to me in all regards , won't be surprised if I turn on the radio one day and hear it again.
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January 21st, 2008
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This is an excellent tune and nice vocals
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January 21st, 2008
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Location: Sweden
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Thank you all for the kind words and positive critic....
Yes i know the mix singing vs music is bad,it's a temporary mix.
and now when i hear the tune i hear the singing should be in the middle of it all...
My daugther she is 17 years old and she wants to be a popstar...
Here in sweden we have a Tv competition called "Idol"it is similar to your "American Idol" infact it's the same program but made for the swedish Television.
Last year she went to Stockholm and sang...but she was to young to enter,but they liked her singing...
so this year she is going to enter again and hopfully go further...
I think she is going to make it!
Chrispy
Let the Music Play!
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January 21st, 2008
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That is great Chrispy, it has the feel of a potential hit presses all the right buttons, your Daughters Vocal was beautiful, the whole recording has a touch of class
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January 21st, 2008
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Join Date: Apr 2006
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Beautiful- strong song all the way around. Good advice here when you get to re-recording/mixing. This is a good one to put on her demo CD...
Chris
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January 21st, 2008
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Good job Chrispy, good tune and great vocals. Well done all around. Good luck to your daughter with Idol, she has a great voice.
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January 27th, 2008
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Very impressive. Great song. You're both very talented.
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January 31st, 2008
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Enjoyed that a lot Chrispy, your daughter is very talented I wish her good luck with 'Idol', ...I wouldn't put myself through that for a solid gold cow!!!! 
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