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December 18th, 2007
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Original song (Feedback Please)
Hello guys,
I have not had time to post in a while. School has been taking most of my fun time  . Thanks god for the holidays and i am able to do what i love the most.
This is another original and i would like you guys to review it. Some of the things that were meant to be made are in the ending. We wanted to built up each note (choir wannabe sound). If you guys can give me feedback or recommendations i would greatly appreciated. Sorry if it sucks but we tried.
http://shup.com/Shup/15081/torment-2.mp3
Thanks in advance edrod
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December 18th, 2007
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  IMO the machine gun percussions are a little to much up front in the mix. Other than that nice job!
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December 18th, 2007
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I agree with X. Nice work though.
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December 18th, 2007
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1. Lower the bass drums
Keep them coming guys Thanks btw allthumbs and X4
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December 18th, 2007
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Thats some wild music there. Nice Job, it rocks.
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December 19th, 2007
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Not into metal too much but i think this is a real good job on this tune. Especially like the ending part and vocals
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December 19th, 2007
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edrod,
That was some energy in that piece, nice playing. Wild man, wild.
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December 19th, 2007
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I agree regarding the machine gun drums. The electric guitar has great tone at the beginning. I'm going to share this with my buddy Vozz. He's the one that keeps me in the metal scene of my "younger" days.
The vocals at the end were very clean. Good job.
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December 20th, 2007
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Wow, nearly fell off the chair when this started, sounded brilliant, very energetic 
When all else fails, read the instructions.
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December 21st, 2007
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Thanks guys, sorry Jomi for scaring you, I scared myself as well last time I heard it full blast.
Here are the things I did
1. Turned down the kick drum
2. Turned down the all the levels as well so it does not sound distorted when cranked up
3. Fixed a track that was off timing on the wannabe choir in the end.
Any other suggestions guys?
Please critic the song so it can become better.
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