[Doug]

it's late here so I have to whisper, which explains the singing that you're about to hear. Don't want to wake up my wife (believe me).

So this is a very very rough first take at my song (lyrics over on songwriting forum). I'm not much of a singer so it's got a bit of a Leonard Cohen feel (or maybe that's wishful thinking). Let me know what you think.

[krissovo]

That is very good, love the lyrics!

Are you going to develop this? I can hear a big band in the background loads of horn etc,

[eddiez152]

Doug,
Nice tune, lyrics as I seen them in your post, and playing.

[X4StringDrive]

Well done

[justinthyme]

I thought you were kidding about the whispered singing.

Good one, Doug

[knight46]

Good job Doug...I would love to hear the full version.

[tomg123]

That was a good song, play it again in the wakin hours
the lyrics are good

[starsailor]

Good lyrics Doug, followed your progress on your other thread, this is great, love your playing style, the whispered lyrics gave the song a Tom Waits smokey bar room sort of feel which suited the lost love theme of the song, good to hear you.

[Doug]

thankyou very much, everyone. I appreciate your comments.

[Jomi]

Nicely played Doug, Liked the whipered vocals.

[Doug]

thanks, Jomi and Jay Jay.