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Original - One or Two

Here's my first stab at putting lyrics in. It's not exactly polished but it's a start. Any good?
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Not bad at all, in fact its very pretty!(sorry girl word there ) I'd lower the vocals just a tad if ya can and post the lyrics. Its easier to critique if we can read it. Sounds great!

On second thought, the vocals are fine..my speakers were too loud !


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Sounds pretty good. I too would like to see the lyrics posted.

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Voila:

One is the prettiest number
That the mind can conceive
It's strong, it lasts, it's stable
In time it won't receed

Single is the nicest state of
Everyone sees you walk by
You smile, you blink, you chuckle
It's easy and you don't have to try

When you wake up alone there's no surprises
The day just starts for you
Problems still come in different sizes
But there's none you can't see yourself through
Until you meet someone new

I won't hear it
But I don't fear it
When the wave breaks above us
And we lose our stable ground
I'm glad you're the one I found

Two is the trickiest number
Oh that complexity
The twisting and turning, the aching
The undying possibility

But when eyes take over the silence
Renewing the broken ties
Having a partner seems smarter
To bring on this wild ride
We're still inside

I won't hear it
But I don't fear it
When the wave breaks above us
And we lose our stable ground
I'm glad you're the one I found

Let's get lost and not get found

No one can

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Very Nice B_jamin


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Wow- that was lovely. I can't place who it sounds like. The first part really gave me a Chicago-style vibe, or maybe America. Great job- sounded great on my phones.


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Very nice, peacefull sort of tune. Good job.


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A friend of mine said it sorta sounded like foo fighters acoustic stuff, which makes sense cause I'm really into them. Thanks for the comments.

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Nice one B_jammin,
I like your voice and I can't think of a better way than Eddiez152 to describe the song - peaceful.

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Nicely done Ben!


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Great tune, Ben. Very mellow & relaxing. Nice clean recording, too.


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Thanks fellows. It's great motivation to make some more.

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