[felixdcat]

Well, I wanted to see what you people think about my playing, so...

I don't have any recording equipment (just a 2$ microphone), but I have Guitar Pro. I attached the MIDI demo and the GP4/5 file.

Be hard on me!

[allthumbs]

I am not sure I can comment on your playing without actually hearing you play your guitar. Download a free recording program and record your guitar through the mic.

[felixdcat]

Sure, I'll try. What do you think of the "composition"?

[Doug]

try converting your gp files to mp3 so we can listen.

[allthumbs]

There are some nice moments in there. Add a G in the bass of your G chords. Add a natural 7 as a passing note in the D chord. That will tie it into the natural 7 in the next chord and make it flow better.
Instead of playing the b7 in the G7 chord near the end, play the open top string which will be a 6. You want to avoid playing natural 7s and b7s in the same tune. Good stuff. As I said add a stronger bass line and add a few notes and it is all good.

[felixdcat]

So, I recorded it. Fingerstyle, a little bit different, with perhaps, more feel. There's noise when I'm strumming chords, because of the low quality mic, but that's alright I guess (I have to put it into guitar to get sound...)

Be hard on me...

[knight46]

+1 to AT's comments, nicely done.

[felixdcat]

I'm glad. Thanks!!!

[allthumbs]

You need to work on smoothing it out and playing cleanly. That is a good simple tune to practice with. Congrats