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Finally had a song hit me that I had to get recorded real quick- here's the rough of it.
I'd like to do something real smooth, maybe with a swinging Frank Sinatra groove to it. Depending on the lyrics (if there are any takers), I might take the tempo down when re-recording.
Hope there's enough to get a good sense of structure. Might need to come up with a bridge.

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Chris, good work on that tune. This baby needs one of those mellow jazz singers.


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My thoughts, exactly. I can pull off the vocals. Just need some words....


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Chris,
Nice tune, real bright bouncy feel.
Kind of like...

Walking on air
Smile at everyone I meet
Got the world by the tail
Life is sweet.

Something like that...

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Well, here's my thought's for what they're worth...It's agiven I can't carry a tune in a bucket but at least it show's where I was trying to go.....hope it helps somewhat

ideasong - X4 thought.mp3

I'd like to spend sometime with you
dancing on the shore
squeeze you in my arms so tight
and love you even more

Holding you makes life complete
your the one for me
time on earth is way too short
I need eternity

To give you the love that you deserve
your the one my heart wants to serve
I love you so
want you to know


PS: really nice tune Chris...


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That was some fine playing, by the time i could help with lyrics it might be to late tho, i'll see. x4's are a pretty good start

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Thanks for the kind comments on the song- that was an EXTREMELY rough cut- didn't even set up mics for it and timing was off here and there.
I like the lyrics from both knight and xstring- they sort of go together, with knight's being an excellent base to build the chorus from and xstring's being good verses. Think it might be enough to work from and put together a rough verse to get cadence set to work from.


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Yes knights lyrics are cool too, i missed them some how the first around

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