Les,
I thought the guitar work was very good. Liked the tune. It remined me of a tune style that Kermit did on a Muppets movie. Sounded very youth like. You know, kid falls in love, trying to let her know about his first loves feeling. Lost for words.
Just keep my heart from Breaking
Chapman Jones - 01/19/07 ASCAP
edited from original
[V1]
My love shows like flowers that grow
On the side of the road
And my heart beats with rhythms deep
About to explode
[Chorus]
I've got all this love
To give to you
And it's all yours for the taking
Just keep my heart from breaking
[V2]
Within your eyes beyond the skys
Of blue - (she's lost but he's not)
But I have dreams that seem like I'm
With you
[Chorus]
I've got all this love
To give to you
And it's yours for the taking
Just keep my heart from breaking
[Bridge]
One heart alone is none
Two hearts can blind the sun
[V3]
So I'm here inside my sphere of lone
li-ness
But it seems so clear you may disappear in a
ghostly mist
[Chorus]
I've got all this love
To give to you
And it's yours for the taking
Just keep my heart from breaking
[Tag]
Please just keep my heart from breaking
Thats only my way of seeing it.
As always, its your take.
eddiez152
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