Hi all I suffer badly from dyslexia and a lack of creativity so this is a big first me.....song writing!
Its about meeting a great woman who the man (I wonder who?) meets a one in a million girl and struggles with his feelings for a while. Anyway here are the lyrics that will go with the tune I have posted here:
Ear punnishment time!
The verses are the slightly depressing minor chords, it perks up a bit for the chorus with major chords. Any feedback would be great
When my skies are dark and grey
You really chase those storm clouds away
You're are what they meant
When people say they are heaven sent
When I met you
I couldn't seem to forget you
And I always seem to find
That you are always on my mind
I feel so happy around you
I thank god that I found you
You wanted to be friends?
But there my feelings just dont end
Oh when I see you smile
It makes my life worthwhile
And since the very start
You have been a big piece of my heart
When I met you
I couldn't seem to forget you
And I always seem to find
That you are always on my mind
I feel so happy around you
I thank god that I found you
You wanted to be friends?
But there my feelings just don't end
I was afraid to tell you
I didn't know what you would do
Ive never felt this way before
Its honest love and thats for sure
When I met you
I couldn't seem to forget you
And I always seem to find
That you are always on my mind
I feel so happy around you
I thank god that I found you
You wanted to be friends?
But there my feelings just dont end
I am still working on the final verse, thats the big conclusion where I am now "In like flyn" as they say with my dream woman. I will also change the last chorus from "You wanted to be friends? But there my feelings just don't end" to something along the lines of we are now lovers but I am stuck with this one so any help would be appreciated as ever.