Hey steve, man that is some of the best critiquing I've seen on some of my writings, I totally appreciate the thought and feeling you put into what you were saying, yeah blow and low are a tad simplistic. The second one flowed pretty easily but it didn't quite fit into a song type format.
And since you're the only one that took the shot at giving me feedback, big props to you my friend. I think songwriting is highly overlooked and is a crucial point to putting the guitar playing to something of your own.
And when you say you wish you had time to work with it, have you thought of anything in regard to this.
Sorry I've been away, lost my female lab this last week and I've taken it kind of hard. She was a big part of my life, but this is a guitar forum. pain breeds words from the heart and soul though, so let the words flow.
That first one was something I was working with kind of like the song without you by Motley crue. That same kind of vibe and feel, maybe thats the problem with it. Trying to make it close to that. That song was a huge influence on me when I was growing up.
Once again thank you for the comments and I will take em into consideration. Maybe I'm a songwriter and not a guitarist who knows. I lost my heart this week, so its hard for me to pull anything out. The guitar is dark and cold right now, lost endless till I get over this.
Thanks Steve,
Brian
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