Matty--
This is really the start of a great tune. Marty's been working hard with ya on this one. Lots of good stuff coming from both of you.
I just wanted to give you a bit of encouragement. You've got some great thoughts going on this song. It's always just a matter of expressing it the right way, huh??! Easier said than done, for sure. Try and express yourself with what you really want to say rather than forcing rhymes. One tool is by using near-rhymes. It can help you maintain the focus. I'm not being critical of your work! Just some friendly advice from an old songwriter.
Steve
Steve Cass
Solid Walnut Music/ASCAP
Becoming a great guitarist has less to do with fancy moves than it does becoming a master of the basics and learning musicianship.
It's not what you can't do. It's how you play what you already know.
Lessons for the Beginner and Beyond"Rhythm guitar is a trip that alot of people miss" -- Tom Petty
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