[randomaire]

Anyone have some ideas for the following two things that I have been throwing around a bit with:

First one is more song like, the second is just some rhyme thrown together.

First one:

How many times must I wonder?
How many times must I cry?
Living so softly
Living for you
Broken in two
My heart left on the floor

How many times must I wait?
How many times were you late?
Out at the club
At home all alone
Lost to you
My cries lost in the night.


Please come back to me
I'm begging you now
Waiting with arms open wide
I long for your touch

All this time
I wonder where you are
All this time
I wonder who you are
All this time
I am still here
Waiting
Waiting
For you....


How many lives should I lose tonight?
How many tears should I weep tonight?
The heart you took from me
The love you gave to me
In the darkness
I scream out your name.

How many days had you been away?
How many nights I looked for you?
It must have been eleven
When I saw you on the news

All this time
I wonder where you are
All this time
I wonder who you are
All this time
I am still here
Waiting
Waiting
For you....

--end

Second one:

In the twilight.
The solemn moonlight.
The wind does blow.
The leaves fall low.
The fog surrounds.
The darkness abounds.

In the solemn hills.
The creaking of the windmill.
Eerie sounding.
Heartbeat pounding.
Footsteps nearing, loud.
Screaming aloud.

The sky, turning black.
Make a mistake, don't look back.
Run away, without sight.
To where there isn't any light.
Falling, rough, into the ground.
Pain, blinding, don't make a sound.

Turn and look, nothing there.
The past, dark and bare.
Run from it, never escape.
Screams, silent, your mouth agape.
Your past is your fright.
In the twilight.

Any ideas or critiques would be welcome. Maybe even play with the words some and put some music behind it. Maybe an idea of a chord progression to go along with it or something. (I'm stuck) Thanks all. Brian.