Totally agree les, I think its just the mind trying so hard to think of something to go along with what was alrdy written, its gotta flow....
I sometimes just write bits and pieces of stuff, and sometimes I come back to them later, and I'm like oh hey that could fit here and I write some more on that little quip and then put it down again. Sometimes I can sit and write a whole page worth of stuff.
I think you have a good start of something that you can work with there, but don't force it, it will come natural ballard.
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