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Originally Posted by naugrim
This is fine work. When saw the lyrics I wondered what you will make out of this. Because it does not look really conventional. You did it fine. only I ask myself: is it ironic or really romantic. The melodic line reminds me for Monty Python; please donīt take me wrong.
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It was not meant to be ironic, but I can see how you might think that with lines like "Of course you can believe the things I'm saying". Some of those lines may need reworking.
Thanks for your appreciation.