Hi Chapman,
Thankyou for posting that.
I've just signed up for a song writing class at a local community college. I think I better start toughening up my skin.
I liked the lyrics but was left a bit up in the air by the line
"There's one more place I gotta go"
I thought that that would get resolved in the lyrics later. It seems that there's a story behind that line that you might want to exploit during the rewrite.
Thanks again for being so open.
-Doug
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