Nothing tragic. I think you need to make the intro and outro more interesting. It is kind of bland and really doesn't seem to connect to the body of the tune. Check your tuning. Sounds like your bass strings are off a bit. You recorded much too loud. You were getting a lot of buzz or clipping.
The chord changes where smooth for the most part and you kept the strumming interesting. Just needs some polishing and tweaking in the recording proccess. Sounds like you already knew what you had to work on before you asked which is a good thing.
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