Hi Les,
Firstly, let me say, I'm fairly new to songwriting and I am finding your songs and reviews very helpful in my endeavours to build my craft. Thanks for sharing them with us.
So I don't feel qualified to give a full technical review yet so I will just stick to the bits which leap out at me as a listener.
This one works well for me except for the line
"or wastin time with a fence"
The image this conjures up is hangin around with someone who trades in stolen goods
If you are trying to portray indecision, would
"wastin time on a fence"
work a bit better?
The other verses and the chorus are all spot on, as is the guitar work
Cheers
Peter