Hey macman,
That link worked. Good job on the song and arrangement.
I didn't hear any problems with clipping other than that first voice thing you posted at the beginning (what is that btw?). I never got to hear the first clip, but this one sounded fine with no clipping.
You went pretty heavy on the reverb, but that was probably the sound you were going for. The vocals are pretty boomy in the low end, so maybe cut a little of the low end out of the vocals and possibly add some high end. I kind of like the dark sound for this song, so don't add to much high EQ.
Nice work.
-tkr