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Originally Posted by Jove d'Ark
I'll never know 'til the water
Splashes on my knees
I'll have to take off my boots
and put on my ski's
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For my 2 cents worth Bro, I think you can come up with something better just here. The 2 opening lines and the rest suggest I am Right. I was immediatealy captured by the ..Terrorized By Empty Eyes etc. and feel a deep empathy with what your soul is singing as it is deeply in concert with my own thoughts about modern day society. Spiteful selfish devolving species, Humans who have LOST thier Humaneness!!
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I would say just the line about skis. The levity doesn't fit with the rest of the tune since it is the only line pointing in that direction. Other than that, I think you did a great job. Thumbs up.