To be honest, I don't think I'd know where to begin with a track like this. For an old twelve bar basher like me, this is advanced stuff Jim and Jim. So, full marks for having a go at it Jim from New Jersey, (lol!) I think what you did was sounding good but it was difficult to hear clearly and If I had to make a comment I'd say the echo effect was a bit too much and that's perhaps what made it difficult to discern where you were going with this Jim.
