wow im so loving this. not only the song but actually witnessing the process from beginning to ... somewhere, its interesting
i like the guitar part you wrote for it. i love how it kinda flows because 1) it sounds nice but 2) the song has a lot of references to nature which in itself is very elegant, very smooth, so the music fits. was this something that you had in your mind when you wrote the music? or did the music just come to you from nowhere?
the one tiny bit i dont like about the guitar part is when it gets to those melodic interludes it sounds like it goes a bit minor and its all a bit too sudden for me. I was just getting into it, absorbing the wonderful lyrics, and matching music, and then it feels like it takes a turn in another direction. not sure though
those interludes are important to keep there because you dont want 5 verses running straight from one into another, especially now that you have no chorus. i dont think its too long or too boring, it kinda draws you in and its sentimental and heartfelt. i like it
