thanks to all. i did omit the children in the first verse and in the 2/nd i did omit the ed on the end of sweat. your comments are exactly what i wanted to hear.
les: i see what you mean by more colorful. the words[ never lonely shall i be], are
spoken in this area. they even say far for fire and fur for far. i will take your advice to heart tho. i will work on it and send in the changes. what do you think of 4/4 time at 92-100 meters, i think you call them chords a/e/d/ in that order?
thanks again all of you. elwood.
