Great lyrics, Really can see it becoming a great, catchy song. I looked and there are only two words i would change (of course you dont have to listen, but i'm just throwing it out there)
In the chorus where it says " Sometimes it gets so hard" maybe change "it" to "life"?
And also in the chorus where the line is "One chance to make it right" maybe "one last chance to make it right" or "only one chance to make it right"
Anyway, just small things.
again some great lyrics and cant wait to hear a recording on the members recording forum
