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Old May 15th, 2006
rjspats rjspats is offline
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Playing guitar for over 10 years.
 
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Location: ontario, canada
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a little feedback please

these are some lyrics i came up with thinking about a girl i used to know. it may be kind of dark but so were the times. i have a basic melody in mind but only lyrics so far. let me know what you guys think and thanx in advance

BOULEVARD GIRL

VERSE
I REMEMBER HOW YOU CRIED THAT NIGHT
DOWN ON THE BOULEVARD
EMPTY FACES ALL STARING BACK
THEIR HEARTS SO COLD AND HARD
A WHISPERED WORD FELL FROM YOUR LIPS
I TOUCHED YOUR SHAKING FINGERTIPS
IN THE NEON LIGHT WE MADE A DEAL
THE TIME WE'D SPEND WE'D NEVER STEAL

CHORUS
DOWN ON THE BOULEVARD
SOMETIMES IT GETS SO HARD
ALL WE'VE GOT IS THE NIGHT
ONE CHANCE TO MAKE IT RIGHT

VERSE
THE DANCER DOESN'T LOOK SO HAPPY
DOING HER ACT UNDER THE BLUE LIGHTS
SHE'S GOT SOME SCARS SHE AIN'T SHOWING
HER SAFETY IS NO ONE KNOWING
HOW MANY TIMES THAT SHE FELL
CHASING ALL HER BROKEN DREAMS
FINDING ONLY NIGHTMARE SCHEMES
AND NO ONE TO HOLD HER HAND

CHORUS

VERSE OR BRIDGE (CAN'T DECIDE)
BROKEN GLASS IN A DIMLIT BAR
PROMISES MADE THAT TOOK US FAR
SHE SAID I DON'T BELIEVE IN THE PROMISED LAND
I THINK IT'S SAD THE WAY SOME PEOPLE MAKE THEIR STAND

CHORUS

OUTRO?

THERE YOU HAVE IT BE GENTLE, I'M A HOPELESS ROMANTIC

BOB

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