just changed things around slightly, i hope it works a bit better
Goodbye Sunrise (Rewrite)
Verse 1
How did we get here my love?
Took my heart and ran with the wind
Now I know that you’ve gone for good
I’m lost and left with nothing within
Verse 2
Every time I saw the sun
She would smile and bring me to life
But in the dark all I can do
Is watch her light just fall from my side
Chorus
Now I have to sit and watch this sunset
But I long for the dawn and will hope for the best
Tho I’d move the stars to put her sun in my sky
I know I have to say, goodbye to my sunrise
Verse 3
She was the light that showed me the path,
And the hand to guide me along
She came and helped me break down my walls,
But gave me pride to help me stay strong
Chorus
Now I have to sit and watch this sunset
But I long for the dawn and will hope for the best
Tho I’d move the stars to put her sun in my sky
I know I have to say, goodbye to my sunrise
End
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