Over the last 2 days ive been having a really really bad time with a certain problem which I ended up writing this song about.
This is something that I didnt spend hours on and just came out, so 3 things really...
1. What do you think of it?
2. What do you think its about?
3. Any improvements?
I honestly dont think its good enough as it is and I really want to make this good so the song represents the strength of my feelings, i just dont know how
Goodbye Sunrise
Verse 1
So it came to this my love,
Take my light and run with the wind
Now our candles blown out for good,
It can’t wake and relight again
Chorus
Tho I have to say, goodbye to my sunrise
I long for tomorrow and will wait for my life
Although in my darkest day, there is no light
I will move the stars to put her sun in my sky
Verse 2
She’s the light that shows me the path,
And the hand to guide me along
Took down my shelters and all my walls,
But gave me pride and helped me stay strong
Chorus
Tho I have to say, goodbye to my sunrise
I long for tomorrow and will wait for my life
Although in my darkest day, there is no light
I will move the stars to put her sun in my sky
End