I liked that a lot Theo, and I'm impressed with your playing after such a short time. I agree that when using headphones the left/right is distracting/uncomfortable when only one side is playing, but fine when both left and right carry audio at the same time.
I particularly liked the melodic lines and the fact that you didn't try to fill every space with lots of notes - it gave the tune a chance to soar - 'wings' and all that.
Very well done.
One good thing about music is that when it hits you, you feel no pain - Bob Marley