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Her heart is like an ocean

I just finished this. Can you tell me what you think of it please. It took a while but hope it's good. Thanks
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  Thank-you Les

I will sit down tommorow and try to do what you told me to do with the song. I apologize for not getting back to you sooner. Had a dumb headache. Thanks for the help. Have a great week. I'll post when I get it worked out.

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I haven't gotten to this yet. I have college homework to do first. I will try to get to this soon. Thank-you for all the help Les.

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  Just doesn't make a good song

I think that it just doesn't make a good song. I'm not to bad a writing college english papers and maybe that is what I have done with "Her Heart". It really doesn't matter that much. It was just thoughts from the past getting put down on paper. I think that I will stick to college papers. Thank-you so much for the time that you invested in trying to help me make it a song. I do appreciate that. I'll leave the song writing to you guys. Thanks again

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Anytime, Yonkle. But do me a favor. Don't give up on writing lyrics! Thirty years from now you'll be saying ......

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Anytime, Yonkle. But do me a favor. Don't give up on writing lyrics! Thirty years from now you'll be saying ......

Take care of college and then work on lyrics.
Thank-you! I don't know what I'll be saying thrity years from now. I may be drinking thickened coffee and chewing on crackers. lol Thanks again for your help. I may try my hand at writing when college is out for the year. We'll see.

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