Here's a song that I wrote a while back.
Wasn't sure where to put it, so I'll let the mods sort it out.
It's called
"Sweep It Away"
I'd appreciate some constructive feedback unless you think it's absolute rubbish.
See what you think anyway.
Sweep It Away
What's your problem stranger
Do I want to know?
If you were to tell me
Would I turn and go?
A wall stands between us
And there it stays
We didn't put it there
And so the love just fades
(chorus)
So tell me a story
And tickle my ears
We'll just sweep it away
Like we've done all these years
Where are the remnants of your thorn
Hey stranger, you wanna see mine?
Would you want to walk in my shoes?
Would you so incline?
Then where do we go from here?
So many questions, without much reply
But stranger, let's try move on
We just can't go on with this lie
(chorus)
So tell me a story
And tickle my ears
We'll just sweep it away
Like we've done all these years
(chorus repeat)
Then fade out.
Okay, now let me have it!
Neil
